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2019-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. spontaneous 2. born and raised in 3. I hope to 4. run-down 5. extremely interested in 1. I heard you are a spontaneous applicant, right? 2. Marta was born and raised in Poland entire her life. 3. Here is your care bear. I hope you to get well \"beary\" soon. 4. This place is run-down for now but I can fix it. 5. Noah used to be extremely interested in cars but after that dreadful accident, he became a man who couldn\'t even look at cars.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!
Jean



1. spontaneous
2. born and raised in
3. I hope to
4. run-down
5. extremely interested in

1. I heard you are a spontaneous applicant, right?

>> You are a walk-in applicant, aren\'t you?

 2. Marta was born and raised in Poland entire her life.
>> Marta was born and raised in Poland her entire life.

3. Here is your care bear. I hope you to get well \"beary\" soon.
>> Here is your Care Bear. I hope you get well \"beary\" soon.

4. This place is run-down for now but I can fix it.
>> correct

5. Noah used to be extremely interested in cars but after that dreadful accident, he became a man who couldn\'t even look at cars.

>> or: Noah used to be extremely interested in cars, but after that dreadful accident, he showed traumatic tendencies whenever he looked at cars. In fact, he was diagnosed with post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD).

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