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2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. She suffered from headache and loss of appetite so that she could’t feel taste, Although it was delectable and appetizing food. 2. These presents are for us thus you can choose whatever you want. It is random. 3. I made a appointment with my freind. And we planned on meeting in our favorite diner in the corner of everything. Yeah it is a famous korean eatery. 4. The old days i feel like going to be outside when i have free time. Time goes by, i prefer to staying at home. I love enjoying a small and simple happiness these days. 5. If i were to be born again, i would be a man who is not sensitive. Women usually feel something sensitively and i want to be a simple minded man.

강사 첨삭

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Jean



1. She suffered from headache and loss of appetite so that she could’t feel taste, Although it was delectable and appetizing food.

>> She suffered from a headache which resulted to loss of appetite and taste. She couldn\'t enjoy the food no matter how delectable and appetizing it is.

 2. These presents are for us thus you can choose whatever you want. It is random.

>> These presents are for us. Thus, you can choose whatever you want. You may pick at random.

 3. I made a appointment with my freind. And we planned on meeting in our favorite diner in the corner of everything. Yeah it is a famous korean eatery.

>> I made an appointment with my friend. We planned on meeting at our favorite diner in the center of everything. Yes, it\'s a famous Korean eatery.

 4. The old days i feel like going to be outside when i have free time. Time goes by, i prefer to staying at home. I love enjoying a small and simple happiness these days.

>> I used to enjoy going out whenever I had free time, but as time went by, I began to prefer staying at home. I take pleasure in small and simple things these days.

 5. If i were to be born again, i would be a man who is not sensitive. Women usually feel something sensitively and i want to be a simple minded man.

>> If I were to be born again, I\'d want to be a man who isn\'t sensitive. Women are usually sensitive that\'s why I wish to be a man who doesn\'t have a complicated mind.

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