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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. I hung out yesterday with my friends, While going shopping and grabbing a cup of coffee. 2. My older brother gave me a new pan but It is useless to me because i got a brand new one. 3. I am in charge of doing my chore. As i mentioned it before, I opted to set the table instead of washing the dish. 4. She is definitely a bit of a homebody. 5.As i see it, it is a last chance to see a shooting star although it was dark and cloudy.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

1. I hung out yesterday with my friends, While going shopping and grabbing a cup of coffee.
>> I hung out yesterday with my friends. We went shopping and grabbed a cup of coffee.

2. My older brother gave me a new pan but It is useless to me because i got a brand new one.
>> My older brother gave me a new pan but it is useless to me because I got a brand new one.

3. I am in charge of doing my chore. As i mentioned it before, I opted to set the table instead of washing the dish.
>> I\'m in charge of my chores. As I mentioned before, I opted for setting the table instead of washing the dishes.

4. She is definitely a bit of a homebody.
>> correct
>> or: She is obviously quite a homebody.

5.As i see it, it is a last chance to see a shooting star although it was dark and cloudy.
>> As I see it, this is my last chance to see a shooting star although it\'s dark and cloudy.

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