1/11 homework

Hi [이름]! So wonderful of you to do your homework despite your busy schedule. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave a wonderful thought on this one by sharing your own experience and giving a quote to ponder on! ^ ^ Some people are overweight due to some reasons, unfortunately people are so easy to judge without understanding or knowing the underlying reasons. It\'s not about being overweight or not, but I guess it\'s all about how you live you life. Like what you have said; and I quote; \"enjoy tasty food and life!\" ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

This is like message to me by myself...... ^^;;

>>This is like a message from me to myself...... ^^;;
I lose my weight more than ten kilogram after graduation of high school. 

>>I lost more than ten kilograms when I graduated high school.
In Korea, most high school students are study hard to enter an better university. 

>>In Korea, most high school students study hard so they can enter in a good university. 
And educational system is very tight to high school students. 

>>Correct
Usually they keeps at their desks from morning to late night at least last year before university entrance test. 

>>Usually they stay at their desks from morning to late night for at least a year before their university entrance test. 
After I lose my weight during university period, it was very proud and happy. 

>>After I lost my weight during my university period, I was very proud and happy. 
I wore cloths what I want to try; mini skirt or tight dress. 

>>I wore clothes that I have always wanted to try, like mini skirts or tight dresses.
But, I got more than ten kilogram after marriage. 

>>But, after I got married, I gained back more than ten kilograms.
I made me lose confidence. 

>>It made me lose my confidence.
Specially, when I couldn\'t find my size in a store, I was very disappointed. 

>>Especially, if I couldn\'t find my size in a store, I feel very disappointed. 
I want to say \"If you don\'t have confidence about your appearance, lose the overweight and enjoy your beauty. but, if you don\'t mind about it, please enjoy tasty food and life\".

>>I want to say \"If you don\'t have confidence about your appearance, lose weight and enjoy your beauty but, if you don\'t mind about it, please enjoy tasty food and life\".