1.12 Homework

2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good morning! Did you have a nice weekend? It's the first day of this week.Good luck! How important is it to keep in touch with people around you like friends and family? We live in such a busy world. However,to keep in touch with people around us is very important.But I think that we should be concerned about people around us like friends and family. Actually I didn't make time to keep in touch with people around me. I should've made more time to keep in touch with them,but I didn't do that.I feel sorry for them. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are starting your week right. Have a great day and take care always! Thank you for submitting your homework.  I am glad that you try to keep in touch with your family and friends. ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! Did you have a nice weekend? >> Correct. It\'s the first day of this week.Good luck! >> Correct.How important is it to keep in touch with people around you like friends and family?We live in such a busy world. >> Correct. However, to keep in touch with people around us is very important. >> Correct. But I think that we should be concerned about people around us like friends and family. >> But I think that we should be concerned about the people around us our like friends and family. Actually I didn\'t make time to keep in touch with people around me. >> Correct. I should\'ve made more time to keep in touch with them, but I didn\'t do that. >> Correct. I feel sorry for them. >> Correct. Thank you! >> Correct.

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