1.12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! Did you have a nice weekend? It's the first day of this week.Good luck!
How important is it to keep in touch with people around you like friends and family?
We live in such a busy world. However,to keep in touch with people around us is very important.But I think that we should be concerned about people around us like friends and family. Actually I didn't make time to keep in touch with people around me. I should've made more time to keep in touch with them,but I didn't do that.I feel sorry for them.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
I hope that you are starting your week right. Have a great day and take care always! Thank you for submitting your homework. I am glad that you try to keep in touch with your family and friends.
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning! Did you have a nice weekend?
>> Correct.
It\'s the first day of this week.Good luck!
>> Correct.How important is it to keep in touch with people around you like friends and family?We live in such a busy world.
>> Correct.
However, to keep in touch with people around us is very important.
>> Correct.
But I think that we should be concerned about people around us like friends and family.
>> But I think that we should be concerned about the people around us our like friends and family.
Actually I didn\'t make time to keep in touch with people around me.
>> Correct.
I should\'ve made more time to keep in touch with them, but I didn\'t do that.
>> Correct.
I feel sorry for them.
>> Correct.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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