1. 12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Explain your understanding with regards to this quote using complete sentences not more than 10.
QUOTE: " Life is beautiful, cherish it!"
If life is infinite, Life will be not beautiful. Everyone will think that I can do something someday later. But life is finite. As real flowers which are finite are more beutiful than artificial flowers which are infinite, finite life is very beautiful and valuable. We should do something right now instead of someday later because life isn't infinite. We should cherish our life.
강사 첨삭
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If life is infinite, Life will be not beautiful.
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If life is infinite, Life will be not beautiful.
>> If life is infinite then life won\'t be beautiful as it is now.
Everyone will think that I can do something someday later.
>> Everyone can think of doing things later rather than doing it now when life is infinite.
But life is finite.
>> However, life has limits.
As real flowers which are finite are more beutiful than artificial flowers which are infinite, finite life is very beautiful and valuable.
>> A real flower is beautiful than an artificial flower just like finite life is better than an infinite life.
We should do something right now instead of someday later because life isn\'t infinite.
>> We should do the things that we want to do right now because life is finite.
We should cherish our life.
>> Correct!
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