1.123 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
What do you think is the most dangerous form of transportation? Why?
I think that car is the most dangerous form of transportations, because car is one of the most used vehicles in our life. There can be more often occurred acidents than others. I drive a car everyday. I think that I should be more careful all the time. I hope that you will also be careful anytime.
Thank you. I have a plan to go out side today,so I submit my homework early.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework right away. Always be careful when driving. Have a safe day! Take care always.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.What do you think is the most dangerous form of transportation? Why?I think that car is the most dangerous form of transportations, because car is one of the most used vehicles in our life.
>> I think that a car is the most dangerous form of transportation, because it is one of the most used vehicles.
There can be more often occurred acidents than others.
I drive a car everyday.
>> Correct.
I think that I should be more careful all the time.
>> Correct.
I hope that you will also be careful anytime.>> I hope that you will also be careful always.Thank you.
>> Correct.
I have a plan to go out side today, so I submit my homework early.
>> I have a plan to go out side today, so I submitted my homework early.
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