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I didn\'t check exactly my stress, but I think that I feel more stressed in the season of autumn and winter.
In Spring, usually, I am busy to start a new semester and projects.
So, I don\'t have time to feel boring.
I usually go to a conference abroad in summer, June or July.
It is like a summer vacation for me since I enjoy freely a few days after finishing the conference.
And I have a big event in August, my wedding anniversary.
So, summer is a very happy and enjoyable season for me.
But, after big happiness, it becomes a little boring and depressed.
Perhaps, it might be getting sentimental in the autumn.
I think many emotional things at that time, in other words, I become very relaxed and calming.
It is quite stressful because I think about my future and annual performance.
And I think the maximum stresses are concentrated at the end of year, December.
I thought about what I couldn\'t do and I blame myself last December.
But, now it becomes a new year again.
I\'ll restart one by one.
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Hi [이름]! Wonderful thoughts! Thank you for this. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
It seems that you are quite busy the whole year round! ^ ^ But we all know that each year, we have our high and low points. Glad we made it to another year and another promise to do better! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I didn\'t check exactly my stress, but I think that I feel more stressed in the season of autumn and winter.
>>CORRECT
In Spring, usually, I am busy to start a new semester and projects.
In Spring, usually, I am busy to start a new semester and projects.
>>CORRECT
So, I don\'t have time to feel boring.
So, I don\'t have time to feel boring.
>>So, I don\'t have time to feel bored.
I usually go to a conference abroad in summer, June or July.
>>CORRECT
It is like a summer vacation for me since I enjoy freely a few days after finishing the conference.
It is like a summer vacation for me since I enjoy freely a few days after finishing the conference.
>>CORRECT
And I have a big event in August, my wedding anniversary.
And I have a big event in August, my wedding anniversary.
>>CORRECT
So, summer is a very happy and enjoyable season for me.
So, summer is a very happy and enjoyable season for me.
>>CORRECT
But, after big happiness, it becomes a little boring and depressed.
But, after big happiness, it becomes a little boring and depressed.
>>But after experiencing such joyful moments, it becomes a little boring and depressing.
Perhaps, it might be getting sentimental in the autumn.
Perhaps, it might be getting sentimental in the autumn.
>>CORRECT
I think many emotional things at that time, in other words, I become very relaxed and calming.
I think many emotional things at that time, in other words, I become very relaxed and calming.
>>I think many emotional things at that time, in other words, I become very relaxed and calm.
It is quite stressful because I think about my future and annual performance.
It is quite stressful because I think about my future and annual performance.
>>CORRECT
And I think the maximum stresses are concentrated at the end of year, December.
And I think the maximum stresses are concentrated at the end of year, December.
>>CORRECT
I thought about what I couldn\'t do and I blame myself last December.
I thought about what I couldn\'t do and I blame myself last December.
>>I thought about what I couldn\'t do and I blamed myself last December.
But, now it becomes a new year again.
But, now it becomes a new year again.
>>But, it\'s a new year again.
I\'ll restart one by one.
I\'ll restart one by one.
>>CORRECT or
>>I\'ll dot hings one at a time.
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