1.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m sorry. I forgot about my homework you said, because I didn\'t take a memo about it.
So, I\'ll write a diary about yesterday.
I\'ve done writing a report to apply for scholarship at 4 pm.
I met with my Korean friend who holding on the exchange event with me at 4:40 pm, and I went to buy some snacks for this event.
Today, many Japanese people came to here, even more Korean.
There were 11 Japanese and 4 Korean.
But Almost of them can speak Korean and they also wanted to do it, so we were just speaking Korean each other.
Half of the event was a talking session, and half of the event was a game session with Korean traditional game.
After that, we got out for a dinner, and we had Indian curry.
It\'s so delicious. But since I took a snack before going to the restaurant, I left half of them.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Congratulations for writing this detailed and very interesting diary! I am quite surprised that you can actually write a lengthy exposition. What is more is your ability to give specific details in each part of your story.
You are very kind and brave in inviting your classmates and friends over for some international meet up. Maybe, it is a trend in your major. Nevertheless, initiating these kinds of activities break the barriers of miscommunication and misconceptions about other countries. It sounds so interesting listening to other nationalities speak your own Korean language.
Playing games is one activity is one thing many young Koreans love to do in a group as I knew it before. Overall, it sounds like a lit gathering even without drinking liquor.
Below are some underlined grammar suggestions. Compare your sentences to the suggestions. Excellent job!
See you.
-T. Donna
So, I\'ll write a diary about yesterday.
I\'ve done writing a report to apply for scholarship at 4 pm.
I met with my Korean friend who holding on the exchange event with me at 4:40 pm, and I went to buy some snacks for this event.
>>> I\'m sorry. I forgot about my homework you said, because I didn\'t take a memo about it.
So, I\'ll write a diary about yesterday.I\'ve done writing a report to apply for scholarship at 4 pm.
I met with my Korean friend who was holding an exchange event with me at 4:40 pm, and I went to buy some snacks for this event. Very good sentences!
Today, many Japanese people came to here, even more Korean.
There were 11 Japanese and 4 Korean.
But Almost of them can speak Korean and they also wanted to do it, so we were just speaking Korean each other.
Half of the event was a talking session, and half of the event was a game session with Korean traditional game.
After that, we got out for a dinner, and we had Indian curry.
It\'s so delicious. But since I took a snack before going to the restaurant, I left half of them.
>>> Today, many Japanese people came here, even more Koreans.
There were 11 Japanese and 4 Koreans.But most of them can speak Korean and they also wanted to do it, so we were just speaking Korean to each other.
Half of the event was a talking session, and half of the event was a game session with a Korean traditional game.
After that, we got out for a dinner, and we had Indian curry.
It\'s so delicious. But since I took a snack before going to the restaurant, I left half of them/ my food.
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