1.14 Homework

2015-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It's already Wednesday. Great weekend will be comming soon. What should we do increase the awareness about environmental pollution? I think that it is very important to pass good environment down to our later generation. To achieve this,we need to educate our kids constantly and we also have to protect the environment from pollution.How important the environment is! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! A good weekend is indeed coming. I am already excited about it. Anyway, thank you for accomplishing your homework early again today. Take note of my correction please. Have a happy day!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It\'s already Wednesday. >> Correct. Great weekend will be comming soon. >> Correct. What should we do increase the awareness about environmental pollution?I think that it is very important to pass good environment down to our later generation. >> I think that it is very important to pass a good environment down to the next generation. To achieve this, we need to educate our kids constantly and we also have to protect the environment from pollution. >> Correct. How important the environment is! >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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