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I think a best way to compare the quality of education with other countries is ask to the students.

>>I think the best way to compare the quality of education with other countries is to ask the students. 
If students enjoy the education, it is high quality education.

>>Correct
Some one say \"in order to improve the country, we should choose smart kids and educate carefully to them.\"

>>Some one says \"in order to improve the country, we should choose smart kids and educate them carefully.\"
And others say \"Every kids have a light to get same education regardless of the money or grade\"

>>And others say \"Every kid has a light to get the same education regardless of the money or grade\"
I think it have both of advantage and disadvantage.

>>I think it has both advantages and disadvantages.
Competition make person to strong and have a passion, however, excessive competition take away free passion.

>>Competition makes a person to be strong and to have passion, however, excessive competition takes away that passion. 
In Korea, the number of teenagers who want to suicide due to the score and violence is increased every year.

>>In Korea, the number of teenagers who want to commit suicide due to scores and violence has increased every year. 
This means the Korea\'s education system is not perfect and requires change.

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I think the government should provide various educational way depending of personal ability.

>>I think the government should provide various educational ways depending on personal ability. 
Getting a upper grade should not to be the purpose to every students.

>>Getting an upper grade should not to be the purpose of every students.