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Occasionally, we learn a lesson from disappointments and failure.
Firstly, Although if I didn\'t do that I will never know, but I can know what or how I have not to do.
If I review it seriously, at least, I will not repeat the same failure.
Second, we can improve problem-solving skills.
I believe that the reason for maturity of adults comes from many disappointment and failure.
When we first meet the situation, we are in a panic.
But we meet the situation repeatedly, we can calmly think of the solution.
Third, many disappointments and failures make us have a wide-perspective.
A person who has many experiences thinks many different results and responsive action plans.
It is very important since we can solve wisely exceptional problems.
I think if we live a happy life peacefully without any difficulties and disappointments, is is very lucky.
But, it is almost impossible.
We have many failures and disappointments in people and situations.
However, in other words, it makes us wiser people.
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Courage is certainly required in this life. I say this because failure is such a huge part of living—it happens to us all. So, is there a lesson to be learned from failure? Successful people seem to think so. Edison once said that it was “ten thousand failures” that led to the final success of a working light bulb. Therein lies a lesson about failure: keep moving forward regardless of failure or number of failed attempts. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Occasionally, we learn a lesson from disappointments and failure.
>>Occasionally, we learn lessons from disappointments and failures.
Firstly, Although if I didn\'t do that I will never know, but I can know what or how I have not to do.
Firstly, Although if I didn\'t do that I will never know, but I can know what or how I have not to do.
>>Firstly, I wouldn\'t know how\'s it like unless I have experienced it, but I would know based on experience.
If I review it seriously, at least, I will not repeat the same failure.
If I review it seriously, at least, I will not repeat the same failure.
>>CORRECT or
>>If I will ponder hard on it, I may not repeat the same mistakes.
Second, we can improve problem-solving skills.
Second, we can improve problem-solving skills.
>>Second, we can improve our problem-solving skills.
I believe that the reason for maturity of adults comes from many disappointment and failure.
I believe that the reason for maturity of adults comes from many disappointment and failure.
>>I believe that the reason for maturity of adults comes from many disappointments and failures.
When we first meet the situation, we are in a panic.
When we first meet the situation, we are in a panic.
>>When we experience the situation for the first time, we panic.
But we meet the situation repeatedly, we can calmly think of the solution.
But we meet the situation repeatedly, we can calmly think of the solution.
>>But if we experience the same situations over and over, we can calmly think of the solution.
Third, many disappointments and failures make us have a wide-perspective.
Third, many disappointments and failures make us have a wide-perspective.
>>CORRECT
A person who has many experiences thinks many different results and responsive action plans.
A person who has many experiences thinks many different results and responsive action plans.
>>CORRECT
It is very important since we can solve wisely exceptional problems.
It is very important since we can solve wisely exceptional problems.
>>CORRECT
I think if we live a happy life peacefully without any difficulties and disappointments, is is very lucky.
I think if we live a happy life peacefully without any difficulties and disappointments, is is very lucky.
>>We would be lucky to live a peaceful life without any difficulties and disappointments.
But, it is almost impossible.
But, it is almost impossible.
>>CORRECT
We have many failures and disappointments in people and situations.
We have many failures and disappointments in people and situations.
>>CORRECT
However, in other words, it makes us wiser people.
However, in other words, it makes us wiser people.
>>CORRECT
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