1.15 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there a homework today? If there is it, maybe I couldn\'t listen to what you said.
So, I\'m also going to write a dairy.
Today, I went to a Japanese Business class. My teacher said [이름] san, you don\'t look sleepy today. Maybe I\'m always looked like sleepy.
I learned about how we should write something politely on email in Business situation.
Japan use new languages in Business.
It\'s annoying me.
After this class, I went to the library and studied my major.
I need to review what I learned, because I\'ll take a lot of class in Korea from new semester.
Honestly, English is more funny than my major.
Until I was in high school, I don\'t like to study English and Korean. I thought I didn\'t fit studying languages.
But when I started studying Japanese in university, I felt I like studying languages.
So, I\'m really excited to meet you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] [이름]!
This is more than enough for a homework. Thank you for sending me this diary.
I am glad to know that you are having a great time learning Japanese and English at the same time. Learning languages is truly your gift. It is a skill that opens windows of culture, business, and huge opportunities for you.
Business English is technically one of the most challenging aspects of learning a foreign language. It is precise and exact. Thanks to ChatGPT and other AIs, it could be easier. However, nothing beats the skill of writing your own sincere and professional business letters. You can always feel if it comes from the heart and written by a real person.
You will enjoy English and Japanese now more than ever since you are open to communication to may nationalities. It all begins with a smile and a warm and heartfelt \"hello\".
Below, there are some underlined words that need some careful attention. Mostly, capitalization of words are proper nouns. Go over this composition well for the rest of suggestions. You did a very good job!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
So, I\'m also going to write a dairy.
>>> Is there a homework today? If there is, maybe I couldn\'t listen to what you said.
So, I\'m also going to write a dairy.
Today, I went to a Japanese Business class. My teacher said [이름] san, you don\'t look sleepy today. Maybe I\'m always looked like sleepy.
I learned about how we should write something politely on email in Business situation.
Japan use new languages in Business.
It\'s annoying me.
So, I\'m also going to write a dairy.
Today, I went to a Japanese Business class. My teacher said [이름] san, you don\'t look sleepy today. Maybe I\'m always looked like sleepy.
I learned about how we should write something politely on email in Business situation.
Japan use new languages in Business.
It\'s annoying me.
>>> Today, I went to a Japanese Business class. My teacher said [이름] san, you don\'t look sleepy today. Maybe I always look like I\'m sleepy.
I learned about how we should write something politely on email in business situations.
Japan use new languages in business.
It\'s annoying me.
After this class, I went to the library and studied my major.
I need to review what I learned, because I\'ll take a lot of class in Korea from new semester.
Honestly, English is more funny than my major.
Until I was in high school, I don\'t like to study English and Korean. I thought I didn\'t fit studying languages.
But when I started studying Japanese in university, I felt I like studying languages.
So, I\'m really excited to meet you tomorrow!
I learned about how we should write something politely on email in business situations.
Japan use new languages in business.
It\'s annoying me.
After this class, I went to the library and studied my major.
I need to review what I learned, because I\'ll take a lot of class in Korea from new semester.
Honestly, English is more funny than my major.
Until I was in high school, I don\'t like to study English and Korean. I thought I didn\'t fit studying languages.
But when I started studying Japanese in university, I felt I like studying languages.
So, I\'m really excited to meet you tomorrow!
>>> After this class, I went to the library and studied my major.
I need to review what I learned, because I\'ll take a lot of classes in Korea for the new semester.Honestly, English is (more fun/ more enjoyable) than my major.
Until I was in high school, I didn\'t like to study English and Korean. I thought I didn\'t fit in studying languages.
But when I started studying Japanese in the university, I felt I like studying languages.
So, I\'m really excited to meet you tomorrow!
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