1. 15 Homework
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Direction: Answer the question using complete sentences in not more than 10.
Question: Do women usually work after they get married in your country?
Women in South Korea almost work after marriage thesedays. In the past, Women did only housework after marriage. Todays, Women also get education of high quility, want to achieve self-realization through their work. But It is very difficult to work if women get pregnant. They must quit their work during pregnant and they experience career discontinuation. After having a child, Women tried to get a job again, but it's very difficult to get except a few jobs. So thesedays, many women in South Korea, don't want to get marriage.
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>> These days, most women in Korea work after marriage.
In the past, Women did only housework after marriage.
>> In the past, women used to do household chores after marriage.
Todays, Women also get education of high quility, want to achieve self-realization through their work.
>> Nowadays, women also get high quality education because they want to achieve self-realization through their work.
But It is very difficult to work if women get pregnant.
>> The problem is it is very difficult to work if women get pregnant.
They must quit their work during pregnant and they experience career discontinuation.
>> They must quit their work during pregnancy and they would experience career discontinuation.
After having a child, Women tried to get a job again, but it\'s very difficult to get except a few jobs.
>> After giving birth, women will try to get a job again and it might be too difficult to find a good job for them because there might be few jobs available by that time.
So thesedays, many women in South Korea, don\'t want to get marriage.
>> So, these days, women in Korea doesn\'t want to get married.
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