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Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I appreciate it. Thanks for the heads up too! Enjoy your conference and hope to talk to you on Monday. ^ ^
Notable thoughts on this one! You gave me something to think about. I was moved with imagination while reading your composition! ^ ^ Yes, the future of medicine is far beyond imagination but with the advancement of technology, I guess anything is possible. I only hope that humanity will use it for the good of all and not for greedy reasons. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I heard that the first job disappeared by AI(Artificial Intelligence) is doctor, because AI can collect data and prescribe best way with maximum probability.
>>I heard that the first job that AI will take over is a doctor, AI\'s can collect data more efficiently and could accurately prescribe the best remedy.
And one of the most popular study is a genetic engineering.
>>And one of the most popular study is genetic engineering.
They say we can control genetically before baby born, near future.
>>They say that in the future, we can genetically control/modify an infant before it\'s even born.
It means we can choose high quality DNA and some illness can be prevent in advance.
>>It means we can choose high quality DNA and some illnesses can be prevented in advance.
I think this is very dangerous morally.
>>I think this is morally dangerous.
Many people want to born a baby having high intelligence.
>>Many people want to have a baby having high intelligence.
In the world, only smart human will be remained.
>>In the future of our world, only smart humans will remain.
Anyway, I think future medicine will be based on genetics within 100 years.
>>Anyway, I think the future of medicine will be based on genetics within 100 years.
I hope I also want to have the benefit in my old age.
>>I also hope that I could benefit from it in my old age.
If so, I must earn a lot of money now... hahaha
>>Correct ^ ^
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