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2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. My english skill was enhanced that’s why i always practice over and over. 2. She was a little chubby back in college. From that time, she decided to lose some weight and then hit the gym . But working out indoors didn’t really suit her so that she became a big jogger. Jogging is the best way to exercise while enjoying nature and scenery. 3. Exercising is the best way to stay healthy. And It enables me to relieve stress and burn a lot of calories. 4. The smart phone is user-freindly and useful machine. 5. The groups of people are on the move by bus. They are heading for museum.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. My english skill was enhanced that’s why i always practice over and over.

>> Regular practice is needed to enhance my English skills.

2. She was a little chubby back in college. From that time, she decided to lose some weight and then hit the gym . But working out indoors didn’t really suit her so that she became a big jogger. Jogging is the best way to exercise while enjoying nature and scenery.
>> She was a little chubby back in college. From that time, she decided to lose some weight and then hit the gym, but working out indoors didn’t really suit her that\'s why she became a big jogger. Jogging is the best way to exercise while enjoying nature and the scenery.

3. Exercising is the best way to stay healthy. And It enables me to relieve stress and burn a lot of calories.
>> Exercising is the best way to stay healthy and it enables me to relieve my stress and burn a lot of calories.

4. The smart phone is user-freindly and useful machine.
>> Smart phones are user-friendly and convenient gadgets.

5. The groups of people are on the move by bus. They are heading for museum.

>> The groups of people are heading to the museum by bus.

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