1.16 Homework

Hi there! Good morning! It's a nice burning Friday.Do you have any good plans? Have a beautiful weekend! In some countries,many teenages have jobs while they are still students. Do you agree or disagree with that? why? I totally agree with that. Having jobs while they are still students is good at foster independence and it's useful to accumulate their experiences.If they can have experences making money while they are students,they could be getting some abilities for their future life. I think it could be help for preparing to overcome the approaching difficulties in their life. WOW! I was astonished to found myself in writing such long sentences today. Thanks to you...

Happy Friday Mr. [이름]! I agree that if you will train students to work while studying, they will learn the value of hardwork and perseverance. Anyway, have a restful weekend! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It\'s a nice burning Friday. >> Correct. Do you have any good plans? >> Correct. Have a beautiful weekend! >> Correct.In some countries,many teenages have jobs while they are still students. Do you agree or disagree with that? why?I totally agree with that. Having jobs while they are still students is good at foster independence and it\'s useful to accumulate their experiences. >> To have a job while studying is a good way to foster independence and it\'s useful in gaining experiences. If they can have experences making money while they are students,they could be getting some abilities for their future life. >> If they can experience making money while they are students, their abilities would be developed for their future life. I think it could be help for preparing to overcome the approaching difficulties in their life.>> I think it is a helpful way to prepare them as they face the difficulties in life.WOW! I was astonished to found myself in writing such long sentences today. >> WOW! I was astonished to find myself writing such long sentences today.Thanks to you... >> Correct.