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2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. I went to a park with my mom in order to go jogging. During the jogging, I lost track of time while enjoying the breathtakig scenery. 2. It is an offence to serve alcohol to minors. 3. Luckily, I got a job recently. I will work as a regular new employee in my workplace from now on. 4. The smartphone is all in on device and it is handy and useful. 5. When i was as a part timer, i had to do odd jobs like general cleaning duties.it was difficult at first time but it was getting better than before.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. I went to a park with my mom in order to go jogging. During the jogging, I lost track of time while enjoying the breathtakig scenery.

>> or: I went jogging in the park with my mom, and I lost track of time while enjoying the breathtaking scenery.

2. It is an offence to serve alcohol to minors.

>> correct

3. Luckily, I got a job recently. I will work as a regular new employee in my workplace from now on.
>> correct

4. The smartphone is all in on device and it is handy and useful.
>> The smartphone is an all-in-one device, and it\'s handy and useful.

5. When i was as a part timer, i had to do odd jobs like general cleaning duties.it was difficult at first time but it was getting better than before.

>> When I was working as a part-timer, I had to do odd jobs like general cleaning duties. It was challenging at first, but I got used to it.

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