1. 17 Dear [Name] teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] teacher.
Hi, I'm [이름].
When I heard you don't do this because of your personal situation yesterday, I was so sad. For 4 months, you have heard my words 3 times a week for 20 minutes. You got to know me and I got to know you too.
You love dancing, and family and relatives. You're a Christian. You majored in English Education and you were a High school teacher in the past. You have a guitar but you don't have enough time so you're not learning how to play the guitar but someday you will learn. You went to Manila with your friends on 2017 Christmas.
I have thought that I can see you at least for 1 year so I was shocked to hear you yesterday. After 1 year, I will be a senior and I will have to study for the Teacher certification examination all day.
I know those who meet must part. How sad. But we're facebook friend and I will always see your uploaded news. I don't know your personal situation that you quit this work(maybe marriage...?) but I hope everything will be good.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!!^_^
Happy, happy Thursday!:)
Now, I\'m teary while reading your homework. lol
Anyway, thank you so much for this letter.
I really appreciate it, [이름]. Thank you for being a good student to me as well.
I am so happy to meet you here. We can still talk on Facebook and we can keep each other updated through Facebook.
I\'m so sorry if I made you feel sad. (Big hug for you!^__^)
Anyway, please don\'t worry because you will have a new and smart teacher.
I wish you all the best in your studies and i hope to see you one day again.^^
I\'m not actually anyone yet!>.<
I will see you tomorrow.
~ T. Lorna ^___^
Dear [Name] teacher.
>> Dear Teacher Lorna,
Hi, I\'m [이름].
>> Hi! This is [이름].
When I heard you don\'t do this because of your personal situation yesterday, I was so sad. For 4 months, you have heard my words 3 times a week for 20 minutes. You got to know me and I got to know you too.
>> Yesterday when I heard that you won\'t be teaching here anymore because you have to fix some personal matters, I felt so sad. We have been talking 3 times a week in four months. I\'ve got to know you and you\'ve got to know me, too.
You love dancing, and family and relatives. You\'re a Christian. You majored in English Education and you were a High school teacher in the past. You have a guitar but you don\'t have enough time so you\'re not learning how to play the guitar but someday you will learn. You went to Manila with your friends on 2017 Christmas.
>> I know that you love dancing. You love your family and friends. You are also a Christian. You studied Bachelor in Secondary Education major in English. You have a guitar but you don\'t have enough time to go and learn how to play it so I hope that someday you will learn it. You spent your 2017 Christmas vacation with your friends in Manila.
I have thought that I can see you at least for 1 year so I was shocked to hear you yesterday. After 1 year, I will be a senior and I will have to study for the Teacher certification examination all day.
>> I have thought that you can be my teacher for at least a year so I was really shocked when I learned yesterday that you are leaving. After one year, I will have to study for my Teacher\'s license everyday.
I know those who meet must part. How sad. But we\'re facebook friend and I will always see your uploaded news. I don\'t know your personal situation that you quit this work(maybe marriage...?) but I hope everything will be good.
>> I know that if we meet someone, there will always comes a time that we should part ways. This is really sad. However, we are friends on Facebook so we can still keep each other updated through our posts. I\'m not sure why you want to quit this job. I thought, \"is it because of marriage?\" Anyway, whatever it is, I hope that everything will go well.
>> Dear Teacher Lorna,
Hi, I\'m [이름].
>> Hi! This is [이름].
When I heard you don\'t do this because of your personal situation yesterday, I was so sad. For 4 months, you have heard my words 3 times a week for 20 minutes. You got to know me and I got to know you too.
>> Yesterday when I heard that you won\'t be teaching here anymore because you have to fix some personal matters, I felt so sad. We have been talking 3 times a week in four months. I\'ve got to know you and you\'ve got to know me, too.
You love dancing, and family and relatives. You\'re a Christian. You majored in English Education and you were a High school teacher in the past. You have a guitar but you don\'t have enough time so you\'re not learning how to play the guitar but someday you will learn. You went to Manila with your friends on 2017 Christmas.
>> I know that you love dancing. You love your family and friends. You are also a Christian. You studied Bachelor in Secondary Education major in English. You have a guitar but you don\'t have enough time to go and learn how to play it so I hope that someday you will learn it. You spent your 2017 Christmas vacation with your friends in Manila.
I have thought that I can see you at least for 1 year so I was shocked to hear you yesterday. After 1 year, I will be a senior and I will have to study for the Teacher certification examination all day.
>> I have thought that you can be my teacher for at least a year so I was really shocked when I learned yesterday that you are leaving. After one year, I will have to study for my Teacher\'s license everyday.
I know those who meet must part. How sad. But we\'re facebook friend and I will always see your uploaded news. I don\'t know your personal situation that you quit this work(maybe marriage...?) but I hope everything will be good.
>> I know that if we meet someone, there will always comes a time that we should part ways. This is really sad. However, we are friends on Facebook so we can still keep each other updated through our posts. I\'m not sure why you want to quit this job. I thought, \"is it because of marriage?\" Anyway, whatever it is, I hope that everything will go well.
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