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2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. biggest accomplishment of my life 2. seemed to be 3. responsible for 4. accommodating 5. first impression 1. I got a good score on final test st that It was the biggest accomplishment of my life. 2. She was out on date with her boyfriend. I think she seemed to be a little bit shy. 3. My mom is responsible for cooking for us and i also help her while setting a table and washing the dishes. 4. The Japenese are always so accommodating with warm smile. 5. As i see it, my first impression of my friend was a tidy and neat person with elegance. That's why she had showed off her beautiful smile on face and she had been always well-dressed on body.

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Jean



1. biggest accomplishment of my life
2. seemed to be
3. responsible for
4. accommodating
5. first impression


1. I got a good score on final test st that It was the biggest accomplishment of my life.

>> Getting a great score on my final exam is the biggest accomplishment of my life.

 2. She was out on date with her boyfriend. I think she seemed to be a little bit shy.
>> She was out on a date with her boyfriend. She seemed to be a little bit shy.

3. My mom is responsible for cooking for us and i also help her while setting a table and washing the dishes.
>> My mom is responsible for cooking for us, but I help her set the table and wash the dishes.

4. The Japenese are always so accommodating with warm smile.
>> The Japanese always have a warm smile and are so accommodating.

5. As i see it, my first impression of my friend was a tidy and neat person with elegance. That\'s why she had showed off her beautiful smile on face and she had been always well-dressed on body.

>> As I see it, my first impression of my friend was that she was not only a tidy and neat person but also elegant. That\'s why she showed off her beautiful smile, and was always well-dressed.

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