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If I have a short vacation, I want to spend a vacation in Boseong, Korea.
It\'s a small country town in the Southern part of Korea and very famous for green tea.
I have never been there, but that is where I want to go most in Korea.
I want to stay in a resort next to green tea, and I will have experience with green tea such as the tea ceremony, tea leaves picking, walking green tea field.
I love to drink tea a lot and my mental health will be getting better as meeting nature with my favorite habit.
If I can get a long vacation, I want to go to Vietnam or Philippines for one month.
I have been to Europe and the United States a few times for conferences or trips.
But, I have been to only tourist spots of Vietnam and Indonesia in East Asia.
I think that some of the cultures in East Asia are similar to Korea compare with Western culture, but some of them are very different.
Moreover, I don\'t know well about the history of East Asia.
So, It will be a good chance to feel and learn.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this one. I really appreciate the effort and your consistency! ^ ^
Very well thought of homework too. Nicely done! ^ ^
I hope you can visit the country someday. I would really love to meet you in person given the chance! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I have a short vacation, I want to spend a vacation in Boseong, Korea.
>>CORRECT
It\'s a small country town in the Southern part of Korea and very famous for green tea.
It\'s a small country town in the Southern part of Korea and very famous for green tea.
>>CORRECT
I have never been there, but that is where I want to go most in Korea.
I have never been there, but that is where I want to go most in Korea.
>>CORRECT
I want to stay in a resort next to green tea, and I will have experience with green tea such as the tea ceremony, tea leaves picking, walking green tea field.
I want to stay in a resort next to green tea, and I will have experience with green tea such as the tea ceremony, tea leaves picking, walking green tea field.
>>I want to stay in a resort next to the green tea farm so I can experience the tea ceremony, tea leaves picking and walking in the green tea farm.
I love to drink tea a lot and my mental health will be getting better as meeting nature with my favorite habit.
I love to drink tea a lot and my mental health will be getting better as meeting nature with my favorite habit.
>>I love to drink tea a lot and I think my mental health will be better as I am close with nature.
If I can get a long vacation, I want to go to Vietnam or Philippines for one month.
If I can get a long vacation, I want to go to Vietnam or Philippines for one month.
>>CORRECT
I have been to Europe and the United States a few times for conferences or trips.
I have been to Europe and the United States a few times for conferences or trips.
>>CORRECT
But, I have been to only tourist spots of Vietnam and Indonesia in East Asia.
But, I have been to only tourist spots of Vietnam and Indonesia in East Asia.
>>CORRECT
I think that some of the cultures in East Asia are similar to Korea compare with Western culture, but some of them are very different.
I think that some of the cultures in East Asia are similar to Korea compare with Western culture, but some of them are very different.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, I don\'t know well about the history of East Asia.
Moreover, I don\'t know well about the history of East Asia.
>>CORRECT
So, it will be a good chance to feel and learn.
So, it will be a good chance to feel and learn.
>>CORRECT
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