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How important is it to have a clean room?
It\'s very important. Because a clean room give comfortable and better concenration for me.
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Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Cleaning and having a clean, clutter-free living space has been linked to many positive health benefits including physical fitness, improved focus, sleep quality, and a reduction in stress and anxiety.
- Kristine ^^
How important is it to have a clean room?
>> Correct.
It\'s very important.
It\'s very important.
>> Correct.
Or >> It is extremely important.
Because a clean room give comfortable and better concenration for me.
>> Because a clean room makes me feel more at ease and I can concentrate more on my studies.
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