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2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. eager 2. willing 3. frightening 4. deal with 5. obtain 1. The spring is upcomming and it has been sunny so that I am eager to hangout with a bunch of my friends. 2. If it is helpful to you, i am willing to do anything in reason. 3. I was go jogging while listening to music as usual. But suddenly my right leg started to get numb. It was so frightening at that time. 4. He is used to deal with all kinds of people in the workplace.Whether it is good or not, his interpersonal skills will be improved. 5. I must obtain approval to have monthly holiday from my company. I am going to go to Hawaii on this summer holiday.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!
Jean


1. eager
2. willing
3. frightening
4. deal with
5. obtain


1. The spring is upcomming and it has been sunny so that I am eager to hangout with a bunch of my friends.
>> The spring is upcoming and it has been sunny that\'s why I\'m eager to hangout with a bunch of my friends.


 2. If it is helpful to you, i am willing to do anything in reason.
>> If it could be of help to you, I would be willing to do anything within reason.

3. I was go jogging while listening to music as usual. But suddenly my right leg started to get numb. It was so frightening at that time.
>> I was jogging while listening to music as usual, but  my right leg suddenly started to get numb. It was so frightening at that time.

4. He is used to deal with all kinds of people in the workplace.Whether it is good or not, his interpersonal skills will be improved.
>> He is used to dealing with all kinds of people in the workplace. Whether his interpersonal skills are good or not, they will eventually improve.


 5. I must obtain approval to have monthly holiday from my company. I am going to go to Hawaii on this summer holiday.

>> I must obtain an approval from my company to go on a holiday. I\'m going to go to Hawaii this summer holiday.

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