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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! You might spend your time well last weekend in my guess.Let's go ahead
with a new week.
What can you do to improve your health?
I am already old enough to do something for my health.To eat something good and do some exercises are good for our health.I like to eat healthy foods.I've drunk burdock tea lately.I made it by myself and I feel nice. Iam trying to eat light in the evenings, and plenty of fresh fruits and vegetables everyday.I am trying to avoid having bacony foods,too. I used to exercise during warm days,but I don't do these days because of the cold weather.I am going to exercise more from a spring season.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Let\'s start this week right by being more productive. Anyway, there is a famous saying, \"health is wealth\"; and a regular physical activity is one of the most important things you can do for your health. So let\'s be healthy and start becoming active.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
You might spend your time well last weekend in my guess.
>> I guess that you spent your weekend well.
Let\'s go ahead with a new week.
>> Let\'s start with a new week.What can you do to improve your health?I am already old enough to do something for my health.
>> Correct.
To eat something good and do some exercises are good for our health.
>> Correct.
I like to eat healthy foods.
>> Correct.
I\'ve drunk burdock tea lately.
>> I have drank burdock tea lately.
I made it by myself and I feel nice.
>> I made it by myself and it felt good.
Iam trying to eat light in the evenings, and plenty of fresh fruits and vegetables everyday.
>> I am trying to eat a light meal in the evening, and have plenty of fresh fruits and vegetables everyday.
I am trying to avoid having bacony foods,too.
>> I am trying to avoid bacons, too.
I used to exercise during warm days,but I don\'t do these days because of the cold weather.
>> I used to exercise during warm days, but I don\'t these days because of the cold weather.
I am going to exercise more from a spring season.>> I am going to exercise more in spring season.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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