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2024-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Read more than 20 books Last year, I didn’t read many books so I will read many books this year. 2. Lose weight I gained weight during I study university entrance exam. Safely I passed exam so It’s time to lose weight. 3. Study english hard This year I want to make foreign friends in university. 4. Get a good grade I will study hard and join many school events! 5. Stay healthy and happy Most important thing is health. I think health is foundation of everything. This year I want to be a person who have health body and mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi So Hu!^^

i hope you the all the best in achieving all your 2024 goals.

They are indeed inspiring.

Number 5 is the most important so don\'t forget to be happy always. :)

Andrea

1. Read more than 20 books
Last year, I didn’t read many books so I will read many books this year.

>> Correct

2. Lose weight
I gained weight during I study university entrance exam. Safely I passed exam so It’s time to lose weight.

>> I gained weight when I was studying for university entrance exam. Safely I passed the exam so it’s time to lose weight.

3. Study english hard
This year I want to make foreign friends in university.

>> This year, I want to have foreigner friends in university.

4. Get a good grade
I will study hard and join many school events!

>> Correct

5. Stay healthy and happy
Most important thing is health. I think health is foundation of everything. This year I want to be a person who have health body and mind.

>> The most important thing is health. I think health is the foundation of everything. This year I want to be a person who has health body and mind.

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