1.20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! I had a long meeting in the morning.so I submit my homework late.
Do you like adventure? Who would you like a big adventure with?
I don't like adventure,but I challenge to my goal constantly. If I have a big adventure,I would like to do that with my wife. If I am with her, I am sure that I can do everything.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework even if you are busy. Anyway, I hope that you can enjoy your daily adventures in life. Live your life to the fullest and enjoy every moment of it. Take care~
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
I had a long meeting in the morning.so I submit my homework late.>> I had a long meeting in the morning, so I submit my homework late.Do you like adventure? Who would you like a big adventure with?I don\'t like adventure,but I challenge to my goal constantly.
>> I don\'t like adventures, but I constantly challenge myself in achieving my goal.
If I have a big adventure, I would like to do that with my wife.
>> Correct.
If I am with her, I am sure that I can do everything.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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