1/20 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday I went to a library where is very closet from my home.
I found the book which I impressively read in my undergraduate school.
The title of the book is \'My sweet city\' and the protagonist is a very ordinary woman in her 30s.
I loved the title because I felt it is my small city in my mind where fill with happiness and dream.
She is living in an urban city and career woman.
She was not married and the marriage is one of her worries.
The book describes her life, thinking, and social situation.
Feminism is a hot potato nowadays in Korea, but it was not when I was a undergraduate student.
Although I was the 20s who haven\'t a job, I wondered about my 30s life from the protagonist.
Now, I am in my 30s, and I became the age of the protagonist in the book.
When I fortuitously found the book, I wondered what I feel and think of the book now.
So, I rent the book and will read it.
Maybe I will get new things from the book and I am very excited.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework and sending it on time. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
Must be an interesting book because you still want to read it again despite having read it in your 20\'s. Hope you will learn more as you go about reading it again. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>Yesterday I went to the library closest to my home.
I found the book which I impressively read in my undergraduate school.
I found the book which I impressively read in my undergraduate school.
>>CORRECT
The title of the book is \'My sweet city\' and the protagonist is a very ordinary woman in her 30s.
The title of the book is \'My sweet city\' and the protagonist is a very ordinary woman in her 30s.
>>CORRECT
I loved the title because I felt it is my small city in my mind where fill with happiness and dream.
I loved the title because I felt it is my small city in my mind where fill with happiness and dream.
>>I loved the title because I felt like it is my small city filled with happiness and dreams.
She is living in an urban city and career woman.
She is living in an urban city and career woman.
>>She is a career woman living in an urban city.
She was not married and the marriage is one of her worries.
She was not married and the marriage is one of her worries.
>>She is not married and marriage is one of her worries.
The book describes her life, thinking, and social situation.
The book describes her life, thinking, and social situation.
>>CORRECT
Feminism is a hot potato nowadays in Korea, but it was not when I was a undergraduate student.
Feminism is a hot potato nowadays in Korea, but it was not when I was a undergraduate student.
>>Feminism is a hot potato nowadays in Korea, but it was not when I was an undergraduate student.
Although I was the 20s who haven\'t a job, I wondered about my 30s life from the protagonist.
Although I was the 20s who haven\'t a job, I wondered about my 30s life from the protagonist.
>>Although I was only in my 20\'s then and hasn\'t got a job, I wondered how my life would be in my 30\'s based on the protagonist life.
Now, I am in my 30s, and I became the age of the protagonist in the book.
Now, I am in my 30s, and I became the age of the protagonist in the book.
>>CORRECT
When I fortuitously found the book, I wondered what I feel and think of the book now.
When I fortuitously found the book, I wondered what I feel and think of the book now.
>>CORRECT
So, I rent the book and will read it.
So, I rent the book and will read it.
>>So I rented the book and will read it.
Maybe I will get new things from the book and I am very excited.
Maybe I will get new things from the book and I am very excited.
>>CORRECT
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