1.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Have a blessed day to you! It's already the middle of the week again.Time flies fast.It was a very interesting class today. thank you.
Do you believe in life after death? Why?
Actually, I don't believe in life after death,but nobody knows about that exactly.
I think that when person died,the soul and body wiill be seprated,and the body will eventually expire and return to the earth,but soul will not perish.I think that it seems like that we are in a dream.I beleive that the soul is permanent,so we should live more nice and help others to gain luck.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good Mr. [이름]!
I also enjoyed our class today. These days, you are more open and expressive of your feelings and ideas that\'s why we have a great time in your class. Keep it up! Have a nice day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Have a blessed day to you!
>> Correct.
It\'s already the middle of the week again. Time flies fast.
>> Correct.
It was a very interesting class today.
>> Our class today was very interesting.
thank you.
>> Correct.Do you believe in life after death? Why?Actually, I don\'t believe in life after death, but nobody knows about that exactly.
>> Correct.I think that when person died,the soul and body wiill be seprated,and the body will eventually expire and return to the earth,but soul will not perish.
>> I think that when a person dies, his body and soul will be separated, our body will return to the earth, but our soul will not perish.
I think that it seems like that we are in a dream.
>> I think that it seems like having a dream.
I beleive that the soul is permanent, so we should live more nice and help others to gain luck.>> I believe that the soul is immortal, so we should be more nice and help others in gaining luck.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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