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1. topic
2. typical
3. as far as I\'m concerned
4. I find
5. infinite
1. The topic was about how to make fried rice in cooking class so that i was so eager to make it that is fairy easy.
>> The topic in cooking class was about how to make fried rice that\'s why I was very eager to make it. I found it fairly easy.
2. This is a typical house. It makes me feel comfortable and relax.
>> This is a typical house. It makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.
3. As far as i\'m concerned, you need to have confidence that\'s why you are more than enough.
>> As far as I\'m concerned, you need to have confidence and I believe you have enough of it.
4. I found that it is difficult to rida a bike. I gave a try agin and again.
>> I found that it is difficult to ride a bike. I gave it a try again and again.
5. The most amazing thing about a infinite life is that there is no answer.
>> The most amazing thing about an infinite life is that there is no answer.
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