1. 22. Homework

2018-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: ** WRITING TASK ** At what times do you appreciate people being honest with you? When I was an elementary school student, I had a habbit to eat with loud slurping and chewing. Anyone didn't tell me about it even my family. Then one of my friend said to me, "[이름], When you eat someting, You sound too much. It's not good to hear. Can you be careful about it?" At first, I felt not good because I thought she doesn't like me. But I stopping sounding when I eat food, and it makes me more refined. I'm thank the friend for being honest with me now.

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When I was an elementary school student, I had a habbit to eat with loud slurping and chewing. Anyone didn\'t tell me about it even my family. Then one of my friend said to me, \"[이름], When you eat someting, You sound too much. It\'s not good to hear. Can you be careful about it?\" At first, I felt not good because I thought she doesn\'t like me. But I stopping sounding when I eat food, and it makes me more refined. I\'m thank the friend for being honest with me now.

When I was an elementary school student, I had a habit to eat with loud slurping and chewing. No one told me about it even my family. Then one day, one of my friends told me \"[이름], when you eat something, you sounded too much, it\'s not good. You should be careful about it.\" At first, I felt bad because I thought she doesn\'t like me. But gradually, I was able to control the sound when I eat and it makes me more refined. Until now, I thank my friend for being honest with me.

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