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Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework and sending it on time. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

You gave vivid examples and related it with your own experience. Thanks for sharing!  ^^ I agree. Children should be given chores and be trained early in life so that they will become independent and reliable individuals in the future. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

I think children should do chores or tasks at home.

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My mother didn\'t give any chores or tasks to me until I got married and separate with parents.

>>My mother never gave me or asked me to do any chores or tasks even until I got married and moved out from their house. 
After I got married, I had to do housework with my husband.

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It took quite long time after work.

>>It took me quite a long time to do simple house work which I usually do after work.
I realized my mother\'s effort at that time, I was very sad.

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>>I realized my mother\'s effort at that time, and I felt very sad.
Many parents don\'t give their children any chores in Korea.

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>>Many Korean parents do not ask their children to do any chores.
Nowadays, many women and guy can not make meal at home by themselves until get married.

>>Nowadays, many women and men can not make meals at home by themselves until they get married. 
This is not special case.

>>This is not a special case.
I think people have to encourage independence, even child.

>>I think people have to encourage independence, even to a child. 
They should choose their taste, dream and future.

>>They should be allowed to make choices, especially when it comes to their future.
Many parents make a decision instead of their children.

>>Many parents make most of the decisions for their children instead of their children making the choice.
I also felt it after I become adult.

>>I also felt it after I became an adult.
 If I will be a mother, I will give my children chores and chance to decide by themselves.

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