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There are lots of things that i can do to improve myself. Do exercise, eat healthy food and wake up early and so on. One of them, I am trying to wake up early. Every waking up early, it is hard at first because I am sleepy and hate to open my eyes but I can feel bracing after that process. I can save my morning time and be more diligent person. In the case of me, I changed English calling\'s schedule time to morning time. Because I needed a way for waking up early and not delaying the calling. As a result, I got to catch two things which can improve my daily work. Besides, I started to read newspaper and clip the articles about company and technology in the morning. I could get current events and terms. Most of all, it helps me get information about companies which have field that i want to or jobs where I want to apply. I think it\'s important to have regular habit. When I do practice on a regular basis, I can improve myself at last.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for this well thought of and wonderfully written homework. ^ ^ I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Waking up early can really get you to do things and finish them earl too which allows you to accomplish more in a day! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>There are a lot of things that I can do to improve myself.
Do exercise, eat healthy food and wake up early and so on.
>>CORRECT
One of them, I am trying to wake up early.
>>One of them is trying to wake up early.
Every waking up early, it is hard at first because I am sleepy and hate to open my eyes but I can feel bracing after that process.
>>Waking up early is hard because I still feel sleepy and I hate to open my eyes, but after that I get to get the hang of it.
I can save my morning time and be more diligent person.
>>I can do more and I become more diligent.
In the case of me, I changed English calling\'s schedule time to morning time.
>>In my case, I changed my English class time to morning.
Because I needed a way for waking up early and not delaying the calling.
>>Because I needed a way to wake up early and not delay the call/class.
As a result, I got to catch two things which can improve my daily work.
>>As a result, I get to do two things which can improve my daily work.
Besides, I started to read newspaper and clip the articles about company and technology in the morning.
>>Also, I started to read newspaper and clip the articles about companies and technology in the morning.
I could get current events and terms.
>>CORRECT
Most of all, it helps me get information about companies which have field that I want to or jobs where I want to apply.
>>CORRECT
I think it\'s important to have regular habit.
>>I think it\'s important to have a regular habit.
When I do practice on a regular basis, I can improve myself at last.
>>CORRECT
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