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My hometown is a very small village in the countryside, Gangwon-do.
>>CORRECT!
I lived there and have been lived until middle school student.
>> I lived there until I was a middle school student.
Gangwon-do has both sides of the mountain and sea.
>>Gangwon-do has a mountain and a sea along it\'s sides.
>>Along the sides of Gangwon-do there is a mountain and a sea.
I lived on the mountainside.
>>CORRECT!
So, the most common foods were vegetables and meats than seafood.
>>This is why, the most common types of food were vegetables and products from the sea.
The famous local product is a rice cake made of potatoes.
>>One famous local product is rice cake made from potatoes.
Potato starch covers red bean insides and the color of the rice cake is transparency due to the steamed starch.
>> The potato starch has red beans inside and the color of the rice cake is transparent due to the steamed starch.
I loved it since it\'s very sweet and soft.
>> I loved it because it\'s very sweet and soft.
When I go to my hometown, I think that and necessarily buy that.
>> When I go to my hometown, I think of that and it\'s necessary for me to buy some.
And corn also famous there.
>> And, the corn is also famous there.
Sometimes I have eaten boiled corn instead of a meal, it also very sweet.
>> I have also eaten boiled corn instead of a meal, it also very sweet.
I have been living in city far away from my hometown from high school.
>> I have been living in a city far away from my hometown since I began high school.
And my hometown has changed a lot.
>> My hometown has changed a lot from that time.
There was the countryside, but there became an urban city now.
>>It used to be a countryside but it is now an urban area.
Sometimes I miss living there, my childhood, maybe it is caused by memory.
>> Sometimes, I miss living there. It reminds me of my childhood.
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