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2020-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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[Where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?] My hometown is a very small village in the countryside, Gangwon-do. I lived there and have been lived until middle school student. Gangwon-do has both sides of the mountain and sea. I lived on the mountainside. So, the most common foods were vegetables and meats than seafood. The famous local product is a rice cake made of potatoes. Potato starch covers red bean insides and the color of the rice cake is transparency due to the steamed starch. I loved it since it\'s very sweet and soft. When I go to my hometown, I think that and necessarily buy that. And corn also famous there. Sometimes I have eaten boiled corn instead of a meal, it also very sweet. I have been living in city far away from my hometown from high school. And my hometown has changed a lot. There was the countryside, but there became an urban city now. Sometimes I miss living there, my childhood, maybe it is caused by memory.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending your homework. I made some corrections for you. Please see them below. Have a good day!~~T.Dee


My hometown is a very small village in the countryside, Gangwon-do.

>>CORRECT!
 I lived there and have been lived until middle school student.

>> I lived there until I was a middle school student.
 Gangwon-do has both sides of the mountain and sea.

>>Gangwon-do has a mountain and a sea along it\'s sides.

>>Along the sides of Gangwon-do there is a mountain and a sea.
 I lived on the mountainside.

>>CORRECT!
 So, the most common foods were vegetables and meats than seafood.

>>This is why, the most common types of food were vegetables and products from the sea.
 The famous local product is a rice cake made of potatoes.

>>One famous local product is rice cake made from potatoes.
 Potato starch covers red bean insides and the color of the rice cake is transparency due to the steamed starch.

>> The potato starch has red beans inside and the color of the rice cake is transparent due to the steamed starch.
 I loved it since it\'s very sweet and soft.

>> I loved it because it\'s very sweet and soft.
 When I go to my hometown, I think that and necessarily buy that.

>> When I go to my hometown, I think  of that and it\'s necessary for me to buy some.
 And corn also famous there.

>> And, the corn is also famous there.
 Sometimes I have eaten boiled corn instead of a meal, it also very sweet.

>> I have also  eaten boiled corn instead of a meal, it also very sweet.
 I have been living in city far away from my hometown from high school.

>> I have been living in a city far away from my hometown since I began high school.
 And my hometown has changed a lot.

>> My hometown has changed a lot from that time.
 There was the countryside, but there became an urban city now.

>>It used to be a countryside but it is now an urban area.
 Sometimes I miss living there, my childhood, maybe it is caused by memory.

>> Sometimes, I miss living there. It reminds me of my childhood.

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