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2018-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: Do you try to use body language when you communicate in English? How? A: Yes, I used the body language to communicate in English when I went to Hong Kong last year. Last Jun, I went to Hong Kong with my friends for travel. In Hong Kong, people use both Cantonese and English. My friend and I used English to communicate with them. We had to use body language to communicate with foreginers because we didn't English well. We could communicate hardly. So I made a decision to learn English. I hope I could tell English without body language when I go to Hong Kong again.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good morning. Thanks for the effort.

Thank you also for sharing your experiences when you went to Hong Kong.

I believe that you will do better. Just keep on practicing your English.

See you! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Yes, I used the body language to communicate in English when I went to Hong Kong last year.

>> Yes. I used body language to communicate in English when I went to Hong Kong last year.
Last Jun, I went to Hong Kong with my friends for travel.

>> Last June, I went to Hong Kong with my friends.

In Hong Kong, people use both Cantonese and English. My friend and I used English to communicate with them.

>> CORRECT

We had to use body language to communicate with foreginers because we didn\'t English well.

>> We had to use body language to communicate with the foreigners because we can\'t speak English very well.

We could communicate hardly. So I made a decision to learn English.

>> We found it difficult to speak English so I decided to study English.
I hope I could tell English without body language when I go to Hong Kong again.

>> I hope that I could speak English without using a body language when I go to Hong Kong again.

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