1.23 Homework

Hi there! Good morning! I am sorry that I was awakened by your phone ringing this morning.I was not myself at that time. I should've woken up more early. Do you think alternative medicines work better than modern drugs? I think that it is very difficult to collect my ideas because I am not an expert.Individually,I concede alternative medicines btter than modern drugs, but modern medicines based on science is important,too.I think that both of these are useful for our health. Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Please take note of my corrections and comment. Have a great weekend!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I am sorry that I was awakened by your phone ringing this morning. >> I am sorry that I was only awakened by your call this morning. I was not myself at that time. >> Correct. I should\'ve woken up more early.>> I should have woken up earlier.Do you think alternative medicines work better than modern drugs?I think that it is very difficult to collect my ideas because I am not an expert. >> Correct. Individually,I concede alternative medicines btter than modern drugs, but modern medicines based on science is important,too. *** Follow proper spacing when writing, one space after each punctuation.  >> For me, I concede that alternative medicines bare etter than modern drugs, but modern medicine based on science is important, too. I think that both of these are useful for our health. >> Correct.Thank you! Have a nice weekend! >> Correct.