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2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. most challenging 2. authority 3. particular 4. come naturally 5. a long way to go 1. The most challeing to me is to eat a cheese and the main reason why i hate this is a flavor of cheese. It feels disgusting. 2. A professior is a person in authority in college. But if it goes too far, it can be dangerous for students. Abusing of power is not correct. 3. I enjoy reading a particular type of book. That is to say, I pefer a book with many pictures and few letter. 4. I used to go jogging instead of joining in gym to lose some weight that's why It came naturally to me. I felt so tired that i couldn't spend more than 30 minutes in the gym. 5. I got a bad cold since yesterday. I still have a long way to go before i stay fit.

강사 첨삭

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Cheers!
Jean


1. most challenging
2. authority
3. particular
4. come naturally
5. a long way to go

1. The most challeing to me is to eat a cheese and the main reason why i hate this is a flavor of cheese. It feels disgusting.

>>  The most challeing to me is to eat cheese and the main reason why I hate it is because of its flavor. It tastes disgusting.

 2. A professior is a person in authority in college. But if it goes too far, it can be dangerous for students. Abusing of power is not correct.

>> A professor is a person of authority in college, but an abuse of such authority can be dangerous for students.

 3. I enjoy reading a particular type of book. That is to say, I pefer a book with many pictures and few letter.

>> I enjoy reading a particular type of book. That is to say, I prefer a book with many pictures and few texts.

 4. I used to go jogging instead of joining in gym to lose some weight that\'s why It came naturally to me. I felt so tired that i couldn\'t spend more than 30 minutes in the gym.
>> I used to go jogging instead of joining a gym to lose weight that\'s why I lost some naturally. I didn\'t like going to the gym because it made me feel so tired that I couldn\'t spend more than 30 minutes there.

5. I got a bad cold since yesterday. I still have a long way to go before i stay fit.

>> I got a bad cold since yesterday. It would take a while before I can recover.

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