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Hello [이름]! Although it is convenient, it is kind of complicated to live in the city. Wherever we  may choose to live, we should  make necessary adjustment. I am glad to know that you are happy where you live. Have a great day!~~T.Dee

I think that the biggest problem with living in cities is the difficulty of relaxation.

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 There is a lot of noise and pollution.

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 It is very easy to access what we want to do, such as shopping or enjoy something.

>> It is very easy to do what we want to do, such as shopping or anything else that we enjoy.

On the other hand, however, they make us in an excited condition always.

>>On the other hand, however, they stimulate our excitement all the time.

It is difficult to stop thinking and doing since there is a lot of enjoyment around me.

>>It is difficult to stop thinking about it and doing related things since there is a lot of enjoyment around me.

And there are many things that we want to buy.

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Moreover, many people are conscious of others and care about their appearance.

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 I have lived in both the city and the countryside.

>> I have lived both in the city and in the countryside.

Now, I am living in the countryside.

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It is always silence here and when I need to buy something I have to go out of my village by car.

>>It is always quiet here and when I need to buy something I have to go out of my village by car.

It is quite inconvenient, but sometimes it makes me very calm and focuses on me.

>>It is quite inconvenient, but sometimes it makes me very calm and it helps me to focus.

I enjoy meditation and writing here.

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 When I was younger, I wanted to live in an urban city, because it is very convenient and I like a crowded city.

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 But, my taste is changing according to age.

>>But now, my taste is changing as I age.

Now, I am happy to live in the countryside.

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