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Hi [이름]! Thanks a million for accomplishing your homework on time! ^ ^
I appreciate that you have related this statement with your friend. I guess you have to ditch this friend of yours! ^^ Just kidding! ^ ^
So they say, age is just a number. It\'s never too late to do something new or to pursue your passion. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Yes, I absolutely agree about the statement.
>>Correct or
>>I absolutely agree with the statement.
Some young people are lazy and have no dream, however, some old people are very active and want to do something new continuously.
>>Correct
So, I think the age is not important in life.
>>Correct
One of my senior started new study after 35 years old.
>>One of my senior student went back to school at 35 years old.
He quit the company, and start Ph.D course.
>>He quit his job in a company, and started his Ph.D course.
And one of my friend have a lot of complaint to everything.
>>And one of my friend has a lot of complain about everything.
Always she have a negative view, and she impute a fault to a person.
>>She always has a negative view about everything and would blame other people.
She doesn\'t want to do something new.
>>Correct
In this case, she is still young, but her mind is already too old.
>>Correct
I think youth means having a passion and intention.
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>>I think being young means to have passion and purpose.
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