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2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Some people say that \"youth is a state of mind\". Do you agree?] Yes, I absolutely agree about the statement. Some young people are lazy and have no dream, however, some old people are very active and want to do something new continuously. So, I think the age is not important in life. One of my senior started new study after 35 years old. He quit the company, and start Ph.D course. And one of my friend have a lot of complaint to everything. Always she have a negative view, and she impute a fault to a person. She doesn\'t want to do something new. In this case, she is still young, but her mind is already too old. I think youth means having a passion and intention.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks a million for accomplishing your homework on time! ^ ^

I appreciate that you have related this statement with your friend. I guess you have to ditch this friend of yours!  ^^ Just kidding! ^ ^

So they say, age is just a number. It\'s never too late to do something new or to pursue your passion. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


Yes, I absolutely agree about the statement.

>>Correct or

>>I absolutely agree with the statement.
Some young people are lazy and have no dream, however, some old people are very active and want to do something new continuously.

>>Correct
So, I think the age is not important in life.

>>Correct
One of my senior started new study after 35 years old.

>>One of my senior student went back to school at 35 years old.
He quit the company, and start Ph.D course.

>>He quit his job in a company, and started his Ph.D course. 
And one of my friend have a lot of complaint to everything.

>>And one of my friend has a lot of complain about everything.
Always she have a negative view, and she impute a fault to a person.

>>She always has a negative view about everything and would blame other people.
She doesn\'t want to do something new.

>>Correct
In this case, she is still young, but her mind is already too old.

>>Correct
I think youth means having a passion and intention.

>>Correct or

>>I think being young means to have passion and purpose.

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