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학생이 쓴 원문
I like receiving advice from other people.
There are many situations which I could not resolve myself.
In that case, if I don\'t receive any advice from the experienced people, I\'m very stressful and it takes long time to solve the problem.
It will be so inefficient.
However, if I get an advice, I will find the proper solution and resolve the problematic situation effectively.
I have already experienced that it\'s better to reach the goal when I receive advice from family, friends, boss, and companions.
I also give a hand to other people who needs my advice.
I try to share my experience for them to reduce mistakes.
강사 첨삭
Good day once again, Dr. [이름]!
If we listen, we learn more than the times we speak. As human beings, we have to learn in eclectic ways. Here on your homework answer below, your words were carefully chosen as well as the word arrangements were almost perfect. Thank you for the time and dedication you made to accomplish this task. I admire your keenness in grammar.
Study the suggestions made below, excellent job!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
There are many situations which I could not resolve myself.
>> Correct!
In that case, if I don\'t receive any advice from the experienced people, I\'m very stressful and it takes long time to solve the problem.
>> In that case, if I don\'t receive any advice from the experienced people, I\'m very stressed and it takes a long time to solve the problem.
It will be so inefficient.
>> Correct!
However, if I get an advice, I will find the proper solution and resolve the problematic situation effectively.
>> Correct!
I have already experienced that it\'s better to reach the goal when I receive advice from family, friends, boss, and companions.
I have already experienced that it\'s better to reach the goal when I receive advice from family, friends, boss, and companions.
>> Correct!
I also give a hand to other people who needs my advice.
>> I also give a hand to other people who need my advice.
I try to share my experience for them to reduce mistakes.
>> Correct!
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