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Do you heve a favorite room? which room do you like most and why?
Yes I have it. My favorite room is living room. Because there are comfortable sofa and tv, pillow and i usually spending take some rest.
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Thank you so much, [이름] [이름]!
Try to make longer sentences to improve your critical thinking skills. It will also help you broaden your vocabulary. See you again next week!
- Kristine ^^
Do you heve a favorite room? which room do you like most and why?
>> Correct.
Yes I have it.
Yes I have it.
>> Yes, I have a favorite room.
My favorite room is living room.
>> My favorite room is the living room.
Or >> I like the living room the most.
Because there are comfortable sofa and tv, pillow
>> We have a comfortable sofa, TV, and pillow in the living room.
and i usually spending take some rest.
>> I usually take a rest in the living room.
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