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Hi [이름]! A Happy Monday to you! Hope you will have an enjoyable one! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I\'m sure you will be a great Mom and at the same time a very good researcher. You know very well that women are good at multi-tasking! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
In Korea, we call Mentor who we respect deeply and want to be like them.
>>In Korea, we call a person we respect deeply and want to be like them a Mentor.
I don\'t have a person who I respect deeply.
>>Correct
But, I was deeply impressed by one woman who I worked together, when I have been lived in Kyoto.
>>But, I was deeply impressed with a woman whom I worked with in Kyoto, Japan.
She was very small woman.
>>She was a very small woman.
She is three years older than me, but looks like elementary school due to her very short height.
>>She is three years older than me but she looks like an elementary student due to her short stature.
I think she is basically smart.
>>Correct
I like conversation with her about my research.
>>I enjoyed my conversations with her especially about my research.
She didn\'t have a baby intentionally, in spite of long a married life.
>>She intentionally not want to have a baby, in spite of being married long.
Finally, she changed her mind and had a baby.
>>Correct
I surprised her life balance after bone baby.
>>I was surprised with how she balanced her life after she had the baby.
In Korea, many women still have a difficulty after got a baby in a society.
>>In Korea, many women still have difficulty balancing their lives after having a baby.
Although her working time was decreased at school, she was researched continuously and publish very good paper at home.
>>Although her working time was decreased at school, she continuously did her work at home and even published a very good paper.
If I will have a baby, I want to be her.
>>If I will have a baby, I want to be like her.
I want to do well care family and my research both.
>>I want to take care of my family well and at the same time continue with my research.
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