1.26 Homework
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Hi there! Good morning! It is a fresh Monday morning. Have a good day.
Do you think aromatherapy could be effective for reducing stress,helping you sleep,and making you study better?
I've heard once before about the effects of aromatherapy.I haven't experienced its effects,but I think that the aromatherapy could be effective for our better life such as reducing stress and making us study better. Anyway I would like to believe its good effects.
Thank you!
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Please go over my corrections for today.
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~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It is a fresh Monday morning. Have a good day.>> Correct.Do you think aromatherapy could be effective for reducing stress,helping you sleep,and making you study better?I\'ve heard once before about the effects of aromatherapy.
>> Once, I\'ve heard about the effects of aromatherapy.
I haven\'t experienced its effects,but I think that the aromatherapy could be effective for our better life such as reducing stress and making us study better.
>> I haven\'t experienced its effects, but I think that aromatherapy could be effective for reducing stress and altering one\'s mood for studying.
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Anyway I would like to believe its good effects.>> Anyway, I would like to believe its good effects.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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