1. 26. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
When someone feel that they\'re not valuable to their lovers or society or even themselves, they\'re likly to think they don\'t want to live. Because human is social animals, people are very sensitive about their value. Everyone is valuable actually. But sometimes someone can feel it\'s not true because of lack of money, failure of works, torment from other people and so on. So I think ability to earn money to live and relationship with friends or family or lovers are very important for living.
When someone feel that they\'re not valuable to their loved ones, or they are not accepted in society and even themselves, they\'re likely to commit suicide and think they don\'t want to live anymore. Humans are social animals, people are very sensitive about their importance. Everyone is valuable actually. But sometimes, someone can feel it\'s not true because of lack of money, failures, torment from other people and so on. In my opinion, the ability to earn money, to live with a purpose, and having a good relationship with family/friends/lovers, are vital factors for living.
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