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2019-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What do you think about evolution and other theories of natural selection?] I think it\'s very natural situation and way to creatures. Our body also is changing and evolve every generation. I heard human\'s eye ability is rapidly decreased. I think this is also one of the evolution, because we are not see something so far by naked eye nowadays. The species of animals is decreasing continuously. Some species are appeared newly, and others are disappeared. Anyone can control this theories. If human can not survive on the earth, we will disappeared at the future. And we have no choice but to do adapt from natural choice.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful of you to submit your homework on time! Very good student! ^ ^ You gave mind provoking thoughts on this one. Yes, I guess living creatures are evolving and are continuously trying to adapt with the harshness of people and the environment. Humans kill elephants because of their tusks. Nowadays, baby elephants are being born without tusks. I guess it\'s a way for them to survive and not to be hunted anymore. ^ ^ 

-Teacher Jedah


I think it\'s very natural situation and way to creatures.

>>I think it\'s a natural occurrence to creatures.
Our body also is changing and evolve every generation.

>>The body is also changing and evolving for every generation. 
I heard human\'s eye ability is rapidly decreased.

>>I heard that the human\'s eye ability is rapidly decreasing. 
I think this is also one of the evolution, because we are not see something so far by naked eye nowadays.

>>I think this is also an evolution, because our capacity to see an object at a distance is decreasing. 
The species of animals is decreasing continuously.

>>Correct
Some species are appeared newly, and others are disappeared.

>>New species are emerging and others are becoming extinct.
Anyone can control this theories.

>>Anyone can control these theories.
If human can not survive on the earth, we will disappeared at the future.

>>If humans can not survive Earth, we might also become extinct in the near future.
And we have no choice but to do adapt from natural choice.

>>And we won\'t have any other choice than to adapt with the course of nature.

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