1.28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! I am a little busy today, so I submit my homework too late.
If you are granted "three material wishes", what kind of things will your wish for? why?
"Three material wishes" are granted for me? Just the thought of it is interesting. Firstly, I want to live as a rich man, so I really want to win the first prize in lottery. Secondly, I want to be a good healthy person. I don't like to be sick in bed. Lastly, I want to speak English fluently. There are no things without trying. so I have got to hard work in all aspects.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sending your homework though you are busy today.
I hope that all your wishes would be granted. Keep the faith!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
I am a little busy today, so I submit my homework too late.>> I am a little busy today, so I submitted my homework too late.If you are granted \"three material wishes\", what kind of things will your wish for? why?\"Three material wishes\" are granted for me? Just the thought of it is interesting.
>> \"Three material wishes\" are granted for me? Just the thought of it sounds interesting.
Firstly, I want to live as a rich man, so I really want to win the first prize in lottery.
>> Firstly, I want to live as a rich man, so I really want to win the first prize in the lottery.
Secondly, I want to be a good healthy person.
>> Secondly, I want to be a good and healthy person.
I don\'t like to be sick in bed.
>> Correct.
Lastly, I want to speak English fluently.
>> Correct.
There are no things without trying.
>> There are no things on earth that we can get without trying.
so I have got to hard work in all aspects.
>> So I have to work hard in all aspects.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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