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Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework in time. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave thought-provoking ideas on this one. You have a point. It really should start in the family. No matter how poor you are and the circumstances surrounding you if you were morally brought up, then I guess there is no reason for a person to become a burden in the society. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I don\'t think like it.

>>Correct or

>>I don\'t think so.
I think the root cause of all crimes is a lack of something in life.

>>I think the root cause of all crimes is the lack of something in life. 
Surely, some people have insufficient money, they commit a crime to survive.

>>Correct
But, some people commit a crime in spite of having a lot of money by various way.

>>But, some people commit a crime in spite of having a lot of money in various ways.
They want to earn more money as taking away from poor man, or hold life cheap.

>>They want to earn more money by getting from poor people, or from those who hold life cheap.
This is also an aspect of lack from love or consideration.

>>Correct
In Korea, often we can watch a news about the \'Gap-jil\'.

>>In Korea, we often watch and hear news about the \'Gap-jil\'. 
Actually this is Korean, but I heard \'Gap-jil\' become a proper noun in the world.

>>Actually this is Korean, but I heard \'Gap-jil\' became a proper noun popular to the world. 
They have a lot of money, and they can do almost all what they want to do.

>>Correct
However, I think they don\'t have any sympathy or consideration.

>>Correct
If we can choose the parents or family, everyone want to choose rich parents and friendly family.

>>If we can choose the parents or family, everyone wants to choose rich parents and friendly family. 
But, we can\'t.

>>Correct
I think most important to prevent crime is loved by family and learn how can we love people.

>>I think the most important way to prevent crime is to be loved by family and learn how we can love people.