1.29 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! I am sorry,I slept late this morning. I was not myself at that time of this morning. I regret drinking last night.
What was some acts of sweet kindness your friends showed to you?
When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that you would have another chance to get a job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant. Finally, I got a new good job at that time. But unfortunately, he took a retirement last year, so I am going to visit him and encourage him with some treating.
I can't forget his sweet kindness until now.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. Please review my corrections.
Have a good day!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I am sorry,I slept late this morning.
>> I am sorry, I woke up late this morning.
I was not myself at that time of this morning.
>> I was not myself at that time.
>> I was not myself this morning.
I regret drinking last night.
>> Correct.What was some acts of sweet kindness your friends showed to you?When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that you would have another chance to get a job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant.
>> When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that I could get another job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant.
Finally, I got a new good job at that time.
>> Finally, I got a new good job.
But unfortunately, he took a retirement last year, so I am going to visit him and encourage him with some treating.
>> But unfortunately, he retired last year, so I am going to visit him and share words of encouragement.
I can\'t forget his sweet kindness until now.>> I couldn\'t forget his act of sweet kindness until now.Thank you
>> Correct.
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