1.29 Homework

2015-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! I am sorry,I slept late this morning. I was not myself at that time of this morning. I regret drinking last night. What was some acts of sweet kindness your friends showed to you? When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that you would have another chance to get a job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant. Finally, I got a new good job at that time. But unfortunately, he took a retirement last year, so I am going to visit him and encourage him with some treating. I can't forget his sweet kindness until now. Thank you!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Please review my corrections. Have a good day!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I am sorry,I slept late this morning. >> I am sorry, I woke up late this morning. I was not myself at that time of this morning. >> I was not myself at that time. >> I was not myself this morning. I regret drinking last night. >> Correct.What was some acts of sweet kindness your friends showed to you?When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that you would have another chance to get a job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant. >> When I lost my job about ten years ago, one of my close friends consoled me by saying that I could get another job soon, and he treated me for lunch at a fancy restaurant.  Finally, I got a new good job at that time. >> Finally, I got a new good job. But unfortunately, he took a retirement last year, so I am going to visit him and encourage him with some treating. >> But unfortunately, he retired last year, so I am going to visit him and share words of encouragement. I can\'t forget his sweet kindness until now.>> I couldn\'t forget his act of sweet kindness until now.Thank you >> Correct.

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