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2018-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Writing Exercise: What are three things that you do not like to talk about? 1. I don't like cold. last week I had a cold but I still have a cold now. 2. spam call makes me tired. more times than 2 a week, I get spam call. 3. I don't like winter. I like snow in the winter but winter is too much cold. This weather makes me staying in my room

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! (^_^)

Thank you for doing your homework. Happy Wednesday to you!

I get your point because we have different tolerance when it comes to hot and cold weather conditions.

I have made some modification, but we can discuss this in class if you want to.

Enjoy the rest of the day!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

1. I don\'t like cold. last week I had a cold but I still have a cold now.

>>> I don\'t like the cold weather because I caught a cold last week and I still have it now.

2. spam call makes me tired. more times than 2 a week, I get spam call.

>>> Spam calls make me tired and I receive spam calls more than twice every week.

3. I don\'t like winter.

>>> Correct!

I like snow in the winter but winter is too much cold.

>>> I like snow, but winter season is too cold.

This weather makes me staying in my room

>>> The cold weather causes me to just stay in my room.

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