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2012-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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Janette hi~ I was happy to heard your voice♥ Always I say you are so kind and sweet! There are one tradition in korea we eat rice soup on every January 1th Actually, It is not rice soup but like a rice cake soup prepared with slices of rice cake,beef,sliced egg,etc.. So!! I ate it yesterday and today I wanted to explain it .But it is so difficult! Janette! Tell me about your nation's tradition Kk.. See ya and have a nice day! how you foresee your life this 2012. ^^ I think that this year will be great for me. Bacause I will grow up more than last year ! First half of the year, I will apply for airline to flight attendant. But I don't expect that this is how things will go. Bacause I don't prepare enough. You already know I should more study and I have to prepare for school. That's why I don't expect it. I will study hard for many purpose Althoughr it fails, I'm ok! because I have a too many times! Anyway, I forsee this year in my life More challenge, More grow up!

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]  I was also pleased to hear your voice. You sounded so sweet and alive as ever. Thank you for doing your best everytime. In my country, we have a belief that we should gather 12 different kinds of round fruits for it will bring good luck. Aside from that, my mother told me to put coins in our windows, maybe it will also bring fortune to our home. Aha~I also heard that wearing polka dots clothes to welcome the New Year will bring good fortune and jumping in place at 12 midnight will make us grow taller. These are very funny myths but sometimes it\'s good to follow them, kkkk... Maybe you can try them next year Miss [이름], kkk... As on how you foresee your 2012, keep on fighting Miss [이름]. Keep on giving your best in eveything and as you know, you have to ask God sincerely to grant your desires. I will also pray for you. See ya in class and have a wonderful evening for now. Janette hi~ I was happy to heard your voice♥ >>Hi Janette! I was happy to hear our voice.Always I say you are so kind and sweet! >> I always say you are so kind and sweet!There are one tradition in korea we eat rice soup on every January 1th >>We have one tradition in Korea, we eat rice soup every January 1st.Actually, It is not rice soup but like a rice cake soup prepared with slices of rice cake,beef,sliced egg,etc.. >>Actually, it is not rice soup but it is like a rice cake soup prepared with slices of beef,sliced egg,etc.. So!! I ate it yesterday and today >>Correct!^^I wanted to explain it but it is so difficult! >>Correct!^^Janette! Tell me about your nation\'s tradition. >>Correct!^^Kk.. See ya and have a nice day!>>Correct!^^How you foresee your life this 2012. ^^>>Correct!^^ I think that this year will be great for me. >>CorrectBacause I will grow up more than last year ! >>Correct!^^First half of the year, I will apply for airline to flight attendant. >>First half of the year, I will apply in an airline as a flight attendant.But I don\'t expect that this is how things will go. >>Correct!^^Bacause I don\'t prepare enough. >>Because i don\'t have enough preparation.You already know I should more study and I have to prepare for school. >>You already know that I should study more and prepare for school. That\'s why I don\'t expect it. >>Correct!^^I will study hard for many purpose >>I will study hard for many purposes.Althoughr it fails, I\'m ok! because I have a too many times! >>Although my plans will fail, I\'m still ok. I can do it many times.Anyway, I forsee this year in my life >>Anyway, I foresee my life this year.More challenge, More grow up! >>More challenges, more grown up.

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