1. 3. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question: If you will compare yourself to something around you, what would it be and why?
I'm like a cat. Cats sleep all day and I also sleep a lot. These days, I'm enjoying my winter vacation with sleeping a lot. I sleep from 11 PM to 10 AM. It's almost 11 hours. During term, I must get up early to go to my University, so I sleep earlier than 11 PM. I sleep at around 10 PM. My classmates all know this so they always say "Wow, you sleep so early! I sleep around 2 AM or 3 AM because I love the free time at dawn." I love free time too, but I love taking a rest with sleeping more.
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>> Correct!
Cats sleep all day and I also sleep a lot.
>> Correct!
These days, I\'m enjoying my winter vacation with sleeping a lot.
>> These days, I\'m enjoying my winter vacation by sleeping a lot.
I sleep from 11 PM to 10 AM.
>> Correct!
It\'s almost 11 hours.
>> I sleep almost 11 hours.
During term, I must get up early to go to my University, so I sleep earlier than 11 PM.
>> During the term when I need to go to the university, i have to wake up early so i sleep earlier than 11 PM.
I sleep at around 10 PM.
>> Correct!
My classmates all know this so they always say \"Wow, you sleep so early! I sleep around 2 AM or 3 AM because I love the free time at dawn.\"
>> My classmates all know that I sleep early so they always say, \" Wow, you sleep so early! I sleep at around 1 AM or 3 AM because I enjoy my free time at dawn.\"
I love free time too, but I love taking a rest with sleeping more.
>> I enjoy my free time, too but I love taking a rest by sleeping more.
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